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I think the book was great. Some time I felt like there was someone telling me a story rather that living it thru the characters eyes most of the book I have read it seems like you are living the story not being told it just my opinion. Other than that I laughed cried and fell in love with the kids. Next there where a few times where I wish you would have went deeper and told more detail but I didn t know if this was the way you wanted it I just wish it would have been longer. One more thing I think there should have been an overall plot like the kids had to come together and fix a major problem like save the camp or a counselor just a thought.
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